Music Video: Feedback

(First of all in the music video on youtube it has made the lip syncing very out of sync because it has moved the clips.)

Today in class we looked at everyones music videos and gave eachother feedback. I have to say that all of the groups music videos are very good! When we looked at ours Mrs Howlett gave us some feedback as well. The main thing that she brought up was that some of the clips were a bit too long. She suggested maybe we put these long clips in here because we didn't have enough footage to use. Our teacher also said that maybe we used a bit too many tracking shots and panning along with other shots. All together my group (myself and Lysette) got 7 feedback sheets back for our music video.

Feedback sheet no.1

• Really good lip syncing and mise-en-scene.
• Like the use of the notes- good storyline.
• Close up of mouth bit wobbly.
• Like the camera angles/ tracking.
• Good effect with fog and followable storyline.

Feedback sheet no.2

The fog gave a really good effect, liked the scene where Ade was looking in the mirror. Lip syncing needs editing and a bit more footage needed but the footage you've got is good. Like the use of notes.

Feedback sheet no.3

1. Shots were a tad shaky: P
2. Nice framing: P
3. Variety of shots- a tiny bit long: P
4. Like the material- the notes (really liked that): P
5. Good mise-en-scene: P
6. Editing-liked the running: P
7. Variety shot transitions: P
8. Synchronised well: P

(In class our teacher gave us a markscheme on how to mark eachother. The three levels are; Basic, Proficient and Excellent.)

Feedback sheet no.4

I liked the storyline. It fitted well within the song. Good shots- some a little too long.

Feedback sheet no.5

• Two clips were too long.
• The fog went well with the music video.
• Liked the notes and the message on the mirror.
• Needed more to the storyline though but overall good.

Feedback sheet no.6

• Liked the setting and fog in the field.
• Some shots went on for too long.
• Liked the idea of the post stick notes.
• Used variety of shots.
• Some variety of shots.
• Some framing of shots were off.
• Lip syncing was near enough to perfect throughout.
• Shots were steady in most of the video.

Feedback sheet no.7

1. B-P; some shakey shots
2. P-E
3. P
4. P
5. P-E
6. B
7. B-P
8. P

(REFER BACK TO FEEDBACK SHEET NO.3 TO SEE THE LEVELS AND AREAS OF THE MUSIC VIDEO.)

The singer was very good and I liked the post-its and the story. Some shots were a bit long and also some problems with editing, some clips were cut short.